Writing about web page http://www.salon.com/nov96/ondaatje961118.html
Your voice sounds like a scorpion being pushed
through a glass tube
like someone has just trod on a peacock
like wind howling in a coconut
like a rusty bible, like someone pulling barbed wire
across a stone courtyard, like a pig drowning,
a vattacka being fried
a bone shaking hands
a frog singing at Carnegie Hall.
Like a crow swimming in milk,
like a nose being hit by a mango
like the crowd at the Royal-Thornian match,
a womb full of twins, a pariah dog
with a magpie in its mouth
like the midnight jet from Casablanca
like Air Pakistan curry,
a typewriter on fire, like a spirit in the gas
which cooks your dinner, like a hundred
pappadans being crunched, like someone
uselessly trying to light 3 Roses matches in a dark room,
the clicking sound of a reef when you put your head into the sea,
a dolphin reciting epic poetry to a sleepy audience,
the sound of a fan when someone throws brinjals at it,
like pineapples being sliced in the Pettah market
like betel juice hitting a butterfly in mid-air
like a whole village running naked onto the street
and tearing their sarongs, like an angry family
pushing a jeep out of the mud, like dirt on the needle,
like 8 sharks being carried on the back of a bicycle
like 3 old ladies locked in the lavatory
like the sound I heard when having an afternoon sleep
and someone walked through my room in ankle bracelets.
Michael Ondaatje
cool poem
COMMENT:
Hey, I read that in my english class…what book is it from????
COMMENT:
Try
Previous Canoes by Michael Ondaatje?
link
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By: benny on 八月 31, 2005
at 6:39 午後
I don’t really get it, but i like a lot of the similies!! Good job keep up the good work..byee
By: sadaf on 十一月 15, 2006
at 6:10 am
what does vattacka mean??
By: haha on 四月 1, 2007
at 4:45 am
I was just thinking the same thing.. What is a Vattacka?
By the way, this poem is quite interesting and I love the different types of similies you’ve thought of. Very good job!
By: Sarah Alberta on 四月 1, 2007
at 4:50 am
http://www.ogrishforum.com/archive/index.php/t-10109.html
I am not the poet. Please don’t be mistaken. This is written by Michael Ondaatje who’s born in Sri Lanka. I tried to google, wikipedia it, but it seems on the net the only thing associate to that word is this poem.
Anyone knows?
By: chitse on 四月 1, 2007
at 7:28 午後